I Thought It Was Perfect. Then My Professor Said, “This Is a Good First Draft, Comfort.”

How that moment shaped my journey as an international scholar

I came to the United States in 2009 as an international student, with a pharmacy degree and over a decade of pharmacy practice and public health fieldwork across Nigeria. I knew my field.

Despite two rounds of pre-academic preparation before my arrival, what I still had to learn was how to navigate an academic system with its own unclear rules, unstated expectations, and informal dynamics that no orientation fully prepares you for.

There were formal rules; I learned those. But without the informal ones – how grants actually get written and won, how to get research published in top journals, how to communicate complex ideas with the clarity and confidence that academic culture demands, and how to build a career in a system that was not designed with scholars like me in mind – I felt completely lost.

I figured most of it out. Some of it I learned the hard way. I recall submitting my first assignment for a foundational course in my area of study. Let me be clear: I had always been a star student all my life. What I did not expect, after I submitted that paper thinking I had put my best foot forward, was my professor’s grading comment, “…this is a good first draft, Comfort.” Needless to say, I did not earn the grade I thought I had worked hard for. But that feedback marked a turning point in my graduate school experience.

So, I did what most of us do – I improvised – I started assignments earlier, revised more times than I can count; showed up to office hours even when I thought they were not particularly helpful; and visited the writing center a few times, only to leave feeling like they did not quite get what I needed either. I found my way largely through informal channels - other international students and friends who were a few steps ahead of me in the program, who shared what they had figured out because I asked, and sometimes because they just saw that I needed it. I did not ask my professors for writing help because I was afraid that asking would confirm what I feared they already thought – that I did not belong. And I did not know that academic editing was even a thing until much later. What I know now is that the most important unwritten rule I had to learn was this: asking for help is not a sign of incompetence or lack of preparation for graduate school. It is a survival skill, and for scholars like me – international, first-generation, parenting and juggling multiple roles, navigating a system that was not built for us – it is also an act of courage.

That journey took me from master's and doctoral programs to a postdoctoral fellowship at the CDC, where I deepened my grant writing and public health communication skills. From there I moved to a leading international humanitarian organization in New York, where I led program documentation, technical writing, and policy briefs for health initiatives in humanitarian contexts. I then went on to a tenure-track faculty position at Arcadia University, where I earned tenure and promotion, built a research lab, secured NIH and foundation funding as a principal investigator, published in journals including The Lancet, and served as associate editor at three peer-reviewed public health journals.

Throughout that journey I was also parenting, mentoring students across institutions, and never forgetting that the scholars who struggle most are the ones the system was not designed to support. And yet, even as I found my footing, I could not stop thinking about the scholars who would not. How many brilliant scholars were losing ground – or giving up entirely – simply because they did not have the right support? Not because they lacked intelligence, dedication, or expertise. But because the system was not built for them, and no one had shown them how to navigate it from where they were.

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